Be aware of subjective additions
Be careful not to use too many subjective additions such as “quite” and “considerable”. These can unintentionally give an unwanted and negative charge to your copy.
Write positive
Thinking in possibilities is a typical characteristic from the core of Radiuz’s DNA. Avoid unnecessary use of words with a negative charge such as “no”, “never”, “none” and “but”. If you consciously deal with this, you make texts much more positive and activating.
Write actively
Avoid phrases with “become,” “go,” “will,” “want,” and “are.” Make it clear and personal.
Do: “We will send you the brochure.”
Don’t: “The brochure will be sent to you.”
Do: “We are happy to take you on an adventure.”
Don’t: “We would be happy if we were to take you on a adventure.”
Avoid faulty parallelism
Faulty parallelism are sentences within sentences. A sentence with faulty parallelism doesn’t read pleasantly.
Do: “If you agree, we will make a journey together that you will never forget.”
Don’t: “The journey we make together, if you agree in going with me, will be one to remember.”
Write as if you’re asking!
Alternate “normal” sentences with question phrases. This makes your copy smoother and more personal. What do we mean by that? Exactly, this!